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Martin Wilson OET letter

TASK –74: Hospital: Lyell McEwin Hospital         

Patient Details: Name: Martin Wilson Age: 62       

Admission Date: 13 October 2009   

Discharge Date: 24 October 2009

Diagnosis: Attempted suicide – overdose of Mogodol Past Medical History: Heavy smoker (40 cigarettes/day)

Bronchitis (multiple episodes) Underweight – 66kg, BMI 18 Psoriasis

Social History: Retired 2 years ago (bookkeeper with Holden Car Company). Lives with wife, Joan, and adult son in housing trust maisonette in Elizabeth. Wife works at Coles, son unemployed. 2 married daughters and 5 grandchildren. Regular social drinker. Depression related to gambling addiction Began gambling 2 years ago

Has lost a lot of money including superannuation funds and is in debt. Wife and family previously unaware of addiction – very angry but also upset about suicide attempt Patient remorseful and ashamed Wants to overcome addiction. Used to be a keen lawn bowls player Has lost friends as result of gambling

Nursing Management: Weak and depressed. Anti-depressants prescribed – Lovan 200g. BP 130/95 Diagnosed with Type II diabetes. Diabetes education regarding diet and oral medications Wheelchair use from 20/10

Psoriasis on Torso and scalp – Diprosone OV cream 2x/day, Ionil T Shampoo. Poor appetite Physically unfit

Discharge Plan: Encouragement to maintain anti-depressant medication routine as the SSRI is established. Mrs Wilson will help with supervision Monthly follow-up appointments with psychologist Dr Brian Murphy, Lyall McEwen Hospital. Social worker appointment to be made for gambling addiction therapy. Strong encouragement and assistance to join Gambling Addiction Action Group, Elizabeth Community Centre. Contact with Quitline needs to be encouraged. Wheel chair required for another week. Frame advised after this Maintain psoriasis treatment

Maintenance of low GI diet for diabetes – involvement of wife necessary. Encouragement in social sporting activities eg lawn bowls?

Writing Task:  Using the information in the notes, write a letter to the social worker, Ms Jennifer Adams, at the Elizabeth Community Health Centre, 125 Munno Parra Avenue, Elizabeth, 5098 requesting follow- up care. Stress that Mr Wilson’s case needs urgent attention.

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Martin Wilson OET letter by Lifestyle Training Centre

Time allowed: Reading time: 5 minutes

Writing time: 40 minutes

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Notes

Hospital: Lyell McEwin Hospital

Patient Details: Name: Martin Wilson

Age: 62

Admission Date: 13 October 2009

Discharge Date: 24 October 2009

Diagnosis: Attempted suicide – overdose of Mogodol

Past Medical History: Heavy smoker (40 cigarettes/day)

Bronchitis (multiple episodes)

Underweight – 66kg, BMI 18

Psoriasis

Social History: Retired 2 years ago (bookkeeper with Holden Car Company)

Lives with wife, Joan, and adult son in housing trust maisonette in

Elizabeth. Wife works at Coles, son unemployed. 2 married daughters and 5 grandchildren. Regular social drinker

Depression related to gambling addiction

Began gambling 2 years ago

Has lost a lot of money including superannuation funds and is in debt.

Wife and family previously unaware of addiction – very angry but also upset about suicide attempt

Patient remorseful and ashamed

Wants to overcome addiction

Used to be a keen lawn bowls player

Has lost friends as result of gambling

Nursing Management: Weak and depressed. Anti-depressants prescribed – Lovan 200g. BP 130/95. Diagnosed with Type II diabetes.

Diabetes education regarding diet and oral medications

Wheelchair use from 20/10

Psoriasis on Torso and scalp – Diprosone OV cream 2x/day,

Ionil T Shampoo

Poor appetite

Physically unfit

Discharge Plan: Encouragement to maintain anti-depressant medication routine as the SSRI is established. Mrs Wilson will help with supervision

Monthly follow-up appointments with psychologist Dr Brian Murphy, Lyall McEwen Hospital

Social worker appointment to be made for gambling addiction therapy

Strong encouragement and assistance to join Gambling Addiction Action Group, Elizabeth Community Centre

Contact with Quitline needs to be encouraged

Wheel chair required for another week. Frame advised after this Maintain psoriasis treatment

Maintenance of low GI diet for diabetes – involvement of wife necessary

Encouragement in social sporting activities eg lawn bowls?

Writing Task

Using the information in the notes, write a letter to the social worker, Ms Jennifer Adams, at the Elizabeth Community Health Centre, 125 Munno Parra Avenue, Elizabeth, 5098 requesting followup care. Stress that Mr Wilson’s case needs urgent attention. In your answer:

expand the relevant case notes into complete sentences

do not use note form

use letter format

The body of the letter should be approximately 180-200 words.

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Ms Jennifer Adams,

Elizabeth Community Health Centre,

125 Munno Parra Avenue,

Elizabeth, 5098

24/10/2009

Dear Ms Adams,

Re: Mr Martin Wilson, aged 62 years.

I am writing to refer Mr Wilson who requires your urgent attention and follow-up care, particularly to overcome gambling addiction, following his discharge today. He is currently recuperating from an attempted suicide, overdose of Mogodol.

At present, Mr Wilson is weak, physically unfit and depressed. He is remorseful, ashamed and wants to overcome his addiction; he is under anti-depressants. He suffers from Bronchitis, Psoriasis, Type II diabetes and has poor appetite. 

Mr Wilson started gambling 2 years ago, following his retirement, without the knowledge of his family at first. Eventually, he lost his friends as well as a lot of money including superannuation funds, ending up in debt, which led him to depression.

Mr Wilson lives with his wife and son. He heavily smokes as well as drinks alcohol.  He used to play lawn bowl.

Based on the above, please provide therapy and help Mr Wilson to recover from his gambling addiction. Actively assist and encourage him to join the Gambling Addiction Action Group in Elizabeth Community Centre as well as to connect with Quitline. Encourage him to take part in social sporting activities such as lawn bowls as well as to continue his anti-depressant medication regimen. He needs the use of wheel chair for another week and walking frame thereafter.

Should you have further queries, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours sincerely,

Registered nurse.

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