OET writing task 24: Mr. Yanlin Ma

TASK 24        Today’s date: 05/04/12

You are Annie Smith, Cardiac Nurse, at the Prince Charles Hospital, Brisbane. Your patient is Mr. Yanlin Ma who underwent emergency cardio-thoracic surgery on the 31st March 2012.

Patient details  DOB: 12th March 1980          Nationality: Chinese    Marital Status: Single, no family in Australia

International student on scholarship for Masters in Information Technology

Medical & Surgical History             No known allergies     No previous surgery

Reports high blood pressure since late 2010               Medications: Panadeine Forte for headaches

Alcohol use: does not drink; Smokes 5-6 cigarettes per day; Weight 105kg, Height 182cm

Family history: Father died of aortic aneurysm at age 44

31/03/12:  Presented to Royal Brisbane and Women’s Hospital with severe chest and back pain

CT scan showed severely dilated ascending aorta and type-A dissection; Transferred to Prince Charles Hospital

In acute pulmonary oedema on arrival; Echocardiogram performed, showing aortic valve incompetence

Open-chest surgery for repair of aortic aneurysm and aortic root replacement with mechanical valve

Post-operation:  Hypertensive initially post-op, Blood pressure stablised by day 3

Satisfactory post-operative recovery, Reviewed by physiotherapist -exercise program provided

Started on Warfarin therapy,  Cardiac outpatient’s appointment at 3 and 6 months post-op

To be discharged 09/04/12

Plan:  Routine wound care, Patient education on Warfarin therapy,

Monitor BP. To be maintained at 120/80 or below

Social: Mother has come to Australia urgently from China. First time in Australia, no English

His lease on rental accommodation has recently expired. He will not complete this semester’s university assessment on time. His visa also expires at end of semester. Concerned about being able to lose weight and stop smoking

Writing Task: Write a referral letter to Ms Susan Williams, the hospital social worker, requesting her to see your patient before discharge to assist with: accommodation; letters for university and department of immigration; referral to programs for smoking cessation and weight loss/exercise.

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