OET writing task 23: Allison Watson

TASK 23: Miss Alison Watson, a 6 year old, is patient in the medical ward of which you are Charge Nurse. Admitted after near drowning                         Hospital: Westmond Public Hospital 22 High Street, Westmond

Patient details

Name  : Allison Watson         Age      : 6 years                       Next of kin     : Marge Watson (mother)

Admission date          : 21 February 2016                  Discharge date           : 3 March 2016

Diagnosis        : Near drowning, potential hypoxic brain injury

Family            : Lives with mother and father (Tim)

Medical history         Chicken pox (3yo),Fractured collar bone (4yo),Mild asthma

Social background    Primary school student (grade 1) Enjoys sport (soccer, athletics)

BackgroundFell into fresh water lake while on fishing holiday with father Found 15-20 minutes later face down.

Paramedics arrived 10 minutes later, basic life support started. On admission to ED: cyanotic, pulseless, apnoeic, fixed & dilated pupils, tympanic temp 27.7°C

Nursing Management and Progress:           21/2/16            CPR performed

Ventilator & endotracheal tubing inserted;

Heated humidifier, radiant warmer, preheated blankets applied Paediatric ventilator used

Initial ABG (Arterial Blood Gas) =7.04 / 84 / 36 / 19 / 78% Spontaneous circulation achieved

23/2/16            ABG = 7.44 / 34 / 94 / 23 / 97% BP 98/64

Tympanic temp 34.8 ˚C                      Patient stable – transferred from ICU to general ward

25/2/16            Temperature normal Unresponsive to command Moving around the bed

No longer hyperventilated for protection Weaning off mechanical ventilation begun

29/2/16            Responsive to commands

Basic communication possible – slurred speech Speech therapy commenced

Difficulty concentrating Paracetamol 3x daily for headaches Coughing up pink sputum Mechanical ventilation stopped

3/3/16  Communication improving, still some slurring of speech Concentration improving, cognitive function appears ok Neurological exams clear – need more tests to check for delayed problems as precaution.

Parents concerned about permanent speech and cognitive effects. Paracetamol given when needed Occasional cough. Ready for discharge

Discharge plan:           Paracetamol for headaches

Monitor cough, return to hospital ASAP if worsens Speech therapy for speech

Neurologist for tests (neuropsychological, visual-spatial. IQ) in one week

GP to check cough, headaches

Parents to monitor cough, headaches, concentration. Call Dr if Minor issues, bring to ER if severe

Writing Task: Please choose 1 only (as instructed by your teacher)

A: Using the information provided in the case notes, write a referral letter to the GP, Dr Anne Simons, Southern Medical Centre, 15 Eltham Place, Curtain

B: Using the information provided in the case notes, write a letter detailing the post- discharge care required for the patient to the patient’s mother, Mrs Marge Watson, 34 View Rd, Tenningway.

C: Using the information provided in the case notes, write a referral letter to the neurologist, Dr Frank Rivers, Head Neurologist at Western Neurology Group, 95 Fitzroy St. Green Valley.

The body of the letter should be approximately 180-200 words.

Please note: It’s not common for a nurse to write a letter to a Neurologist in the OET exam. However, adapting your writing to suit the needs of different professions is a useful learning tool

Submit your OET letters for correction: (for a minimal fee)
https://goltc.in/oet-writing-correction/

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *