OET writing task 17: Mr. Gerald Baker

TASK 17

Patent Details: Mr. Gerald Baker is a 79 year old patient on the ward of a hospital in which you are Charge Nurse

Marital Status  :           Widower (8 years)

Admission Date          :           3 September 2010 (City Hospital) Discharge

Date     :           7 September 2010

Diagnosis        :           Left Total Hip Replacement (THR) Ongoing high blood pressure

Social Background      :           Lives at Greywalls Nursing Home (GNH) (4 years).

No children

Employed as a radio engineer until retirement aged 65 Now aged-pensioner. 

Hobbies chess, ham radio operator

Sister, Dawn Mason (66), visits regularly, v supportive. –

plays chess with Mr. Baker on her visits No signs of dementia observed

Medical Background  :          

2008 – Osteoarthritis requiring total hip replacement surgery

1989 – Hypertension (ongoing management)

1985 – Colles fracture, ORIF

Medications    :           Aspirin 100mg mane (recommenced post-operatively) Ramipril 5mg mane

Panadeine Forte (co codamol) 2 qid prn

Nursing Management and Progress    :daily dressings surgery incision site

Range of motion, stretching and strengthening exercises Occupational therapy

Staples to be removed in two weeks (21/9). Also, follow-up FBE and UEC tests at City Hospital Clinic

Assessment    Good mobility post-operation

Weight-bearing with use of wheelie-walker walks length of ward without difficulty

Post- operative disoriention re time and place during recovery, possibly relating to anaesthetic- continued observation recommended

Dropped Hb post-operatively (to 72) requiring transfusion of 3 units packed red blood cells; Hb stable (112) on discharge – ongoing monitoring required for anaemia

Discharge PlanMonitor medications (Panadeine Forte). Preserve skin integrity Continue exercise program

Equipment required: wheelie-walker, wedge pillow, toilet riser, Hospital to provide walker and pillow. Hospital social worker organised 2-wk hire of raiser from local medical supplier

Writing task: Using the information in the case notes, write a letter to Ms. Samantha Bruin, Senior Nurse at Greywalls Nursing Home, 27 Station Road, Greywalls, who will be responsible for Mr. Baker’s continued care at the Nursing Home.

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