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Mary Bell OET letter

TASK 42 You are a registered nurse working at Newtown Community Hospital. Your patient, Ms. Mary Bell, is being discharged today.         Patient: Mary Bell (Ms.)                    Age      : 66 Years

Marital status            : Single                                   Family            : Nil

First admitted           : 24 June 2017, Newtown Community Hospital        Discharge       : 15 July 2017

Diagnosis        : Unstable diabetes mellitus.              

Small infected (left) foot ulcer

Medical history         : Non-insulin-dependent diabetes mellitus -15 years.

Medications   : Glibenclamide (Glimel) 5mg daily.

Metformin (Diabex) 850mg t.d.s. Amoxycillin/clavulanate (Augmentin Duo Forte) 875/125mg    orally, b.d.

Social/family background: Retired at 65 from managerial position 2016.

Lives alone in own four bedroom home.

Income: small pension – much lower than pre-retirement income.

Reports no relatives or close friends. Reports no outside interests.

Since retirement alcohol intake has increased and dietary quality has decreased.

Periodic           problems         with     self-administration      of hypoglycaemic medication.

Nursing management and progress: Medical hypoglycaemic agent (glibenclamide) to continue Antibiotic therapy (Augmentin Duo Forte) for review at completion of current course. Ulcer daily saline dressing, monitor wound margins, observe for signs of complications, review healing progress, etc.

Discharge plan: Monitor medication compliance, blood sugar levels, alcohol intake, diet. Encourage moderate exercise programme. Suggest establishment of income-producing activity Encourage establishment of social activities. Prepare a letter to the community nurse, emphasising the need for an overall life- style plan, and suggesting involvement of community social worker service.

Writing Task: Using the information given in the case notes, write a letter of discharge to Ms. Jane Rudik, the community nurse at Newtown, Community Health Centre, informing her about the patient’s condition and her medical and social needs, Address your letter to Ms. Jane Rudik, Community Nurse, Newtown Community Health Centre, Newtown

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Brett Davis OET letter

TASK 41        Brett Davis

This patient has been in your care and is now going home from the Royal Children’s Hospital, Read the case notes below and complete the writing task that follows.

Patient            : Brett Davis – 18 months old

Admitted          : 10 August 2016

Discharged : 12 August 2016

Brett’s parents instructed to take the child to the Surry Hills

Community Health Clinic – appointment with the Maternal & Childcare Nurse. Diagnosis : Chronic Nasal Congestion / AURTI

SOCIAL BACKGROUND: Brett is the 2nd child in the family- one sister (Emily) aged 5 years

Mother           : June Davis – 23 y.o. Working as a waitress; late night shifts

Father: Malcolm Davis – 24 y.o. Construction worker: works during daytime

Lives in rental accommodation, a two-bedroom apartment

NURSING NOTES:

Denver Developmental Screening Test (DDST) administered – normal development

Antibiotics: Amoxicillin 50mg/kg 8 hourly, commenced 12 noon, 12 Aug 2016

Nasal and ear clearing before feeds and as required                        

 A-febrile after 36 hours

Free fluids given which were well tolerated                                      

Congestion restricted his sucking ability

DISCHARGE PLAN:          

Support Mrs. Davis in improving parenting skills

Continue antibiotics (complete 14 day course)                      

Continue free fluids

Continue ear and nasal clearing as required                          

Observe for signs of elevated temperature

WRITING TASK:     Brett’s parents have been instructed to take Brett to the Surry Hills Community Health Clinic. Write a letter of referral to Sr Mary Bouvier, Maternal & Childcare Nurse, Surry Hills Community Health Clinic, Main Road, Surry Hills, New South Wales 2010 requesting she arrange for Brett to be monitored until antibiotics are completed; Community Nurse to make sure both parents are instructed in proper procedure for ear and nasal clearing. Letter should be 180 to 200 words long / only the first 25 lines will be considered.

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Mary White OET letter

TASK 40 Mary White- resident at Kingsville Retirement Village

You are a registered nurse employed by the Kingsville Retirement Village. It is your duty to attend to call outs from the residents in the Independent Living Units as well as assisting the staff in the Low Level Care unit. It is 7 pm (19:00 hours) and you receive a call from the daughter of one of the residents. She has just visited her mother and found that she cannot rouse her. You go to the unit, open the door with your key and find the lady unconscious, face down on the floor. The daughter telephones the Ambulance Service. You examine the lady (Mary White) and find the following:

CNS: rousable only to pain                

Respiratory: slow, laboured breathing.

CVS – dusky purple colour to face, good capillary refill to fingers, pulse slow and full.

Urogenital- has been incontinent of urine

Musculoskeletal – flaccid muscles, is able to be moved onto side in the Recovery position to move.

You perform the following measurements:   

PR & BP-37 degrees C; 58; 14; 150/90                     

BSL-6.5mmol/l

Her past history includes:               

Pregnancies x4 with live births (30 years ago)          

Hypertension

Widowed 6 years ago             

Cataracts in both eyes, awaiting surgery

Cardiac arrhythmias for which she takes Digoxin

The ambulance arrives and you verbally hand over the information; they then decide to transport Mary to hospital. Her daughter has packed all her medication with the overnight bag.

Your task:      Write an introductory letter for the Admissions Officer (AO) at the Kingsville Hospital, 150 Bridge Road, Richmond, Victoria 3121, they can plan Mary’s care.

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Beverly Williams OET letter

TASK 39 Bev Williams

This 68-year old patient has been in your care for the past 10 years. During the past 8 years, Mrs. Williams has developed diabetes. It is not well controlled. You are now referring her on to a Public Health Nurse for a health education program.

Relationships                                  Has four children – all adults – all married

Gets on well with husband                  Likes visiting her daughter in the country

Has active social life – visits friends regularly

Medical History                 Type II Non-Insulin Dependent Diabetes – onset 8 years ago

Prescribed tablets soon after diagnosis           No problems with sugars or infections

Has monitored urine with sticks at home        Not always well controlled

Does not care about diet regime                     High BP for past 5 years-on medication

Overweight for past 30 years (BMI 32)          Vision OK                   Has worn spectacles for past 20 years

Grandmother had Diabetes; died of gangrene of the foot              Husband is also Diabetic

Diabetic Plan          No special diet            Tries not to have sugar                        Buys diabetic cordial

Taste food while preparing meals in kitchen  Eats cream cakes at afternoon tea time                      Loves fruit

Unaware of consequences of careless diet      Had trouble Losing weight

Very little exercise walks around the neighbourhood occasionally   Likes a glass of wine with evening meal.

Treatment Plan           Monitor urine – Monitor bleed sugar levels with   glucometer

Needs to be educated re: Diabetes and importance of special diet

Needs to attend formal diabetic education program (daytime classes at Hospital)

Increase Daonil from 15 to 20mg per day                                  

Needs vision checked every two to three months

Needs to lose weight – has increased 3.5kg in last 6 months.  Suggest a suitable exercise program? Swimming

Writing Task: Using the information in the case notes, write a letter of referral to: Ms. Michella Mansoura, Public Health Nurse, 125 Canterbury Road, Ringwood, Victoria 3134 Australia, DO NOT use notes form- use complete sentences. Expand the relevant notes in the treatment plan requesting that Ms. Mansoura take over the management of this patient. Letter should be no more than 25 lines long,

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Ling Wu OET letter

TASK 38                    Today’s Date: 22/02/2012

Patient Details          

Name   : Ling Wu, female

Date of Birth         : 01/03/1994

Marital Status    : Single.

Social History : Ling is a student of the Bachelor of Accounting course in the University of Western Sydney.

She is a cyclist for many years. She lives in a 3-bedroom one-story house with her parents and younger sister.

No tobacco, alcohol or drugs

Past Medical History : None                                                            

Allergies         : No known allergies.

Date of admission      : 26/01/2012 trauma ward at St. Angus public hospital

Date of discharge    : 23/02/2012

Diagnosis                    Left tibial-fibular fracture secondary to cycle accident.

Left above- knee amputation              Phantom limb pain.

Description of accident         : The patient was parked off the road, when a car skidded across and collide with her cycle.

At Emergency Department

The initial assessment: an open tibial-fibular fracture of the left extremity with near amputation.

Her Glasgow coma scale was 15 and head CT was negative.

Obs: BP 178/90 mmHg. P-110 bpm, RR-22/min, SpO2-90 in room air.

The patient was taken to the operation theatre and above-knee amputation was performed on the same day.

Hospital progression 27/01/2012

Post-operative pain controlled with intravenous opioids (morphine) via PCA infusion pump

The limp has been elevated for one or two hours, two or three times each day to reduce local oedema & pain.

She had been totally assisted with mobility

Bladder care (Indwelling catheter inserted on 26/1/2012 and removed on 28/01/2012)

Deep venous thrombosis (DVT) prophylaxis: The patient had negative Dopplers and prophylaxed with Fragmin 5000 IU once daily, subcutaneously.

Bowel management: The patient was started on Citrucel secondary to her pain being treated with narcotics. On a high fibre diet and fluid intake.

Prevention of Infection: Cephalexin IV tds-5 days, protective dressing and drainage

01/02/2012 She complained of a cramping and twisted posture of the missing limb (phantom limb pain), treated with oploids. (Endone 5mg BD), tricyclic antidepressant (amitriptyline 10 mg tds) and antiepileptic (Neurontin 109 mg tds). Commenced participating in physiotherapy program and involved with pre- prosthetic training.

15/02/2012      Orthopaedics:

Amputation incision remained intact                         

Stitches out                           

  

Wound almost healed

Residual limb wrapped with an ace bandage to swelling and pain and re-applied every 3-4 hours

Mental State: Insomnia, silent rumination, and social withdrawal;              She has a fear of being seen in public.

Consulted with social worker.

22/02/2012                  Fragmin was discontinued.

No signs of DVT were observed.

Phantom limb pain: she remained stable on Paracetamol- Osteo 665 mg qid and Tramadol prn.

Min oedema of the stump w/peeling skin, no signs of infection.

Bowel management: Citrucel was discontinued. She started Coloxil with Senna one tablet bd and Dulcolax suppository prn.                             

Fluids, Electrolytes, Nutrition: The patient was on a regular diet.

Able to walk with rolling walker for short distance along the ward and use a wheelchair for long distance, but needs increasing assistance for stairs.                                         

Trained to wrap the stump with ace bandage.

Parents were educated about assistance with ADL’s.            

Vital sign with no abnormalities.

Discharge Plan           Warm compress, ice packs and massage are recommended for phantom limb pain.

To continue regular exercises as per physio program and dressings with ace bandage to shape the amputated limb for fitting with prosthesis. The patient is at increased risk of developing post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) or depression in the late period after the trauma.

Peer counseling or support groups to support her can be helpful.

The patient will be seen at the trauma clinic at 3.30 pm on 13/04/2012.

Medication On Discharge (Self-Administration):  Neuretin 100 mg qB h Paracetamol Osteo 665 mg qB prn,

Trazodone 50 mg p.o at bedtime, prm           

            

Laxatives prn

WRITING TASK: You are a charge nurse at the trauma ward of St. Agnus Hospital, Sydney. Using the information in the case notes, write a letter to a Community Nurse at Spirit Family Medical Practice, 12 Gar Street, Holy Hill, NSW, 2167. In your letter explain relevant social and medical histories and request the Community Nurse to visit Ms. Ling Wu after discharge to provide proper health management and assistance for this patient and her family.

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Amber Watson OET letter

TASK 37: Today’s Date: 20th May 2012

You are the Nurse Practitioner at a Women’s Health Clinic in Melbourne. As a Women’s Health Nurse Practitioner, you are responsible for the primary service which means you may request appropriate tests and prescribe certain medications, but you are required to refer complex case to Medical Practitioner. You had 2 recent appointments with the patient, Amber Watson, as follows:

PATIENT DETAILS                        Name   : Amber Watson

Address           : 20 Pixe Street, North Fitzroy, Melbourne. Phone    :( 07) 4567 8910

Date of Birth: 25/03/1993 Marital Status: Single       Next of kin : Janine Watson (Mother)

General Health          No known allergies                 No current medications

No significant medical or surgical history                  Weight: 73 kg; Height 165 cm

BP 125/75; Pulse 76                            No reported recreational drug use      

Commenced smoking in last 9 months, now smokes 10/day.                         Alcohol use on weekend only. Drinks -3 ‘Vodka Cruisers'(premix spirit equivalent to 2 standard drinks each) on a night.

Sexual and Reproductive Health                                On oral contraceptive pill for last 12 months.

Regular menstrual periods each 28 days. LMP 7 days ago.                No previous Pap tests.

No history of STI.                   No pregnancies.

Recently ended monogamous relationship of 10 months and now has a new partner of 2 months- not sure if monogamous. Does not use condoms. Last sexual contact 14 days ago.

Has been immunized for Hepatitis B.

16th May 2012 Amber presented to clinic requesting a Pap test. Pap test suggested by mother. Amber concerned about weight gain of 10 kg over last 12 months and wants to know about other methods of contraception.

Sexual and reproductive health history taken. Partner risk discussed -no IV drug use, no recent overseas travel.

No reports of pain, discharge or irregular bleeding.                           Urine PCR test for Chlamydia collected.

Pelvic exam. Undertaken- NAD                     Pap smear taken

Patient to return in 3-4 days for Chlamydia results. Pap test results in 2-4 weeks.

Safer sexual practices discussed, including barrier protection.           Cervical screening information sheet provided.

Risks of smoking and benefits of quitting discussed with patient.     Referred to Quitline.

Referred to women’s Health nutritionist.

20 May 2012                           Returned for results: PCR test positive for Chlamydia trachomatis.

Patient informed of results.                                                         Arranged notification of partners

Prescribed azithromycin 1 gram as a single dose. Advised not to have sexual contact for 7 days after treatment.

For referral to GP for further testing and contraceptive advice.

WRITING TASK Write a referral letter to the Dr. Jane Thompson, Medical Practitioner at the North Fitzroy General Practice 12 Raeburn, St North Fitzroy 3124, requesting review of your patient to discuss contraceptive options and further testing for sexually transmitted infections and blood borne viruses.

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Robyn Harwood OET letter

TASK 36. You are Sonya Matthews, a registered nurse at the Spirit Hospital. Robyn Harwood is a patient in your care. Read the case notes below and complete the writing task which follows.

Patient Details Name : Robyn Harwood Address     : 8 Peach St, New Farm

Phone  : (07) 3397 2695                     Date of Birth: 4 February 1950

Social Background

Marital status: Widow, No children, Lives alone           Next of kin : Megan Mack (Niece)

Niece lives with husband in Sydney who works as software engineer for Google Australia.

Sister died recently. No other relatives.

Medical History Diabetes Mellitus Type 2 Metformin 500mg mane

Diagnosis:  Right partial rotator cuff tear

Presented to Spirit hospital with pain and weakness in the right shoulder, especially when lifting arm overhead.

Descending stairs at home and slipped, falling onto outstretched arm. X-ray and MRI showed a partial rotator cuff tear.

Orthopaedic surgeon discussed surgery. Patient prefers to try non-surgical treatment.

Date of admission : 30-06-2011                                                        Date of discharge : 12-07-2011

Treatment: Ibuprofen orally QID Cortisone injections Daily physiotherapy

Nursing Care Needs: Needs blood glucose level monitoring 4 hourly May be elevated because of cortisone

Needs assistance with shower and housework Orthopaedic review on 01/08/11

WRITING TASK: Using the information in the case notes, write a letter to the Nursing Director Ms. Jenny Attard of the Community Home Care Agency, requesting visits from the home care nurse.

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Vamuya Obeki OET letter

TASK 35. Today’s Date        25/07/09

Notes: Vamuya Obeki was admitted through the Children’s Emergency Department for acute meningoencephalitis as a result of a complication following mumps.

Patient History.  Address      : 32 Sexton St, Ekibin

Phone  : (07) 38485555

Date of Birth: 23 May 2005

Admitted          : 15th July 2009

Gender          : Male

Discharged : 25th July 2009

Country of birth: Sudan

Diagnosis        : acute meningoencephalitis

Social History. Parents         : Miri & Abdullah Obeki, refugees, arrived in Australia in 2008 Employment:

Abdullah: Golden Circle pineapple factory, shift worker                             

Miri     : housewife

Accommodation        : Recently moved to rental accommodation

GP          : No family doctor

Sibling : 2 year old brother, Saeed                 

Language        : Dinka, Arabic

Interpreter needs : Abdullah understands spoken English but has limited written skills. Miri has limited understanding of English. Abdullah attends English classes

Medical History: Parents state both children had some kind of vaccination at birth but the vaccination record has been lost. Parents unaware of vaccine for Mumps.

Discharge Plan: Appears to have fully recovered from mumps and acute meningoencephalitis. Will need advice on recommended vaccines for both children.

Will need neurological check-up.

Writing Task: Using the information in the case notes, write a letter to The Director, Community Child Health Service, 41 Jones Street, Ekibin, requesting follow-up of this family.

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Ms. Amy Vineyard OET letter

TASK 34 Ms. Amy Vineyard is a patient in your care at the St. Kilda women’s Refuge Centre. She is 6 week pregnant with her first child. She presented two days ago, requesting help for her substance abuse problems. She reports a desire to reduce or cease her alcohol consumption and desire to reduce a cease her drug use. No desire has been indicated to decrease or stop cigarette use. She now wishes to be discharged but will require ongoing support throughout her pregnancy.

DISCHARGE SUMMARY:

Name  : Ms. Amy Vineyard              

Age      21.      

Admission      : 6/1/09

Diagnosis        : Pregnant substance abuse Discharge : 8/1/09

PLAN: Community mental health nursing required daily next 2 weeks minimum.

Pt wishes to continue living with a friend on her sofa

Psychiatric support needed for depression.     Methadone program Alcoholics Anonymous meetings.

I trimester Ultrasound at 2 weeks;      Maternal clinic appointment needed.

REASON FOR ADMISSION

Pt. self-admitted due to concern about pregnancy. Confirmed pregnancy test the days before (5/1/09)

Reported pain in lower back.  Weight loss (6 kg over 2 months).

Some memory loss.     Tingling in feet, difficulty sleeping, excessive worry and hallucinations

Feeling depressed-history of depression         No pain in hips or joints.

No decrease in appetite           No double vision

TREATMENT: Pt. monitored and blood tests for HIV/AIDS and STDs    

Counseled re nutrition and pregnancy. Counseled re HIV/AIDS and STDs risk                   

Discussed possibility of rehabilitation clinic for ‘driving out’

LIFESTYLE:            Nicotine-daily 30-40 cigarettes          Started smoking at 15 years old

Drugs used cannabis, amphetamines, cocaine, and heroin     Started all above at 16 years old

Injects heroin, occasionally shares infecting equipment         Alcohol 8 units/day- max, units/day-15

Started drinking at 16 years old.         Lives with a friend, Sophie, on her sofa         No contacts with parents

HISTORY Suicidal thoughts, self-harm in past          Never seen a psychiatrist

WRITING TASK: Using the notes, write a letter about Ms. Vineyard’s situation and history to new community health nurse. Address your letter to Ms. Lucy Ban, Registered Nurse, Community Health Centre, St Kilda.

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Constance Maxwell – OET letter

TASK 33 Patient History:

Constance Maxwell is a patient in your General Practice. DOB 8.8.34 Married, 3 adult children

21.2.06 Subjective:    Complains of inflamed, sticky and weeping eyes. Thyroidism diagnosed Feb.03

High blood pressure June 05,Hip replacement July 05

Medications thyroxine 1mg daily, Atacand 4mg daily, Fosamax 10mg daily No known allergies

Objective: BP 135 /75 P 74

Both eyes red, watery discharge right eye worse than left

Assessment: Bilateral conjunctivitis likely viral Chlorsig Drops 4hrly

3.3.06 Subjective:                  No improvement to eyes, blurred vision

Objective: Odema eye lids ++Marked conjunctival congestion

Plan: Chloramphenicol 0.5% sterile 1 drop 3 times daily Bion Tears 1 drop each eye 4 hrly. Review 2 weeks

5.6.06 Subjective: Accompanied by husband. Very distressed. Has lost most sight in both eyes can make out light or dark shapes but unable to read or watch TV.

Objective: Marked oedema upper and lower lids. White sticky discharge Unable to read eye chart

Plan: Refer immediately Emergency Dept. Royal Melbourne Eye hospital. Husband will drive to hospital

WRITING TASK Using the information in the case notes, write a letter of referral to the Registrar, Emergency Department, Royal Melbourne Eye Hospital, Alexandra Tce, Fitzroy, Melbourne 3051

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